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The Abyss,

I was stupid to fall in now look at me I'm falling,
I tried to scream but there was nothing sure, I can hear my screams but it echoed in my head,
I was falling, endlessly.
All I can see is the clouds, the darkness that surrounds me while... I... fall...
I should've listened to those who are talking to me about the location,
I am falling.
The darkness is now surrounding my body,
I tried to break free but there is no use.
They turn into particles,
I desperately tried to pull away but nothing happened,
Even the darkness was surrounding me.
I reached out my hand,
The darkness was surrounding it....
I will crystallize again...
I have disappeared... to the abyss...

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:iconyamisamurai24:
This is the FIRST time, I did poetry so yeah... I hope you enjoyed and yes this is inspired by Calling
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*silvermoonmanga Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ormegerd. This is awesome. You win. :iconsuperheroglompplz:
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:iconyamisamurai24:
Thanks! :thanks:
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*silvermoonmanga Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
No problemo! for a first attempt at poetry, you did wonderfully.
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:iconyamisamurai24:
Thanks but hey, do you think I did better than hopeless?
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*silvermoonmanga Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Pfft- Are you joking? You're WAY better. You're professional compared to that chick.
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:iconyamisamurai24:
Thanks! :) BTW I made another poem
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*silvermoonmanga Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes, I saw. ^_^
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:iconyamisamurai24:
Cool
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